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Word, don't come out from within me
do not get involved in rhymes
enough timrs you played on this 'swing'
now get calmposed; rest inside.
So many times you were singing loud
among the plentiful deafs
now admit that much ,yet- don't regret
remain dumb or quiet,-- for some time .
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Word, don't come out from within me
do not get involved in rhymes
enough timrs you played on this 'swing'
now get calmposed; rest inside.
So many times you were singing loud
among the plentiful deafs
now admit that much ,yet- don't regret
remain dumb or quiet,-- for some time .
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