Saturday, April 14, 2012

Spark




by Phanibhusan Basu



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Word, don't come out from within me

do not get involved in rhymes

enough timrs you played on this 'swing'

now get calmposed; rest inside.



So many times you were singing loud

among the plentiful deafs

now admit that much ,yet- don't regret

remain dumb or quiet,-- for some time .





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